Part One:
I don’t mean to say that my talent is anything comparable to Miesha’s because she has a lot more that she needs to persevere through, but I try to persevere through whatever I do.
The perseverance I built up for myself was the result of being challenged through the course of my life. In school and in life I have faced a lot of challenges. Although I did not do the best in the schoolwork that challenged me or overcame extreme odds like Miesha in life, I did not give up. I tried my best to do what I needed to get done no matter how much it seemed hopeless to me because I always knew I had to try.
In the present as well as in the future, I plan to use this “talent” to get me through college and life. No matter what in the world I decide to do, perseverance is a key factor in my success. I know that college and life will have extreme challenges that I need to persevere through in order to be successful. Without perseverance, I would simply give up, be lazy, and have a horrible future. I’m going to use my “talent” of perseverance to get through the hardest moments in life because persevering through the challenges is the only way I can grow. (And I don’t mean height-wise to those who thought of physically growing -_- I know I’m short but I meant on the inside!)
Part Two:
Literary Connection: Jesus' Parable of the Talents NOTE: In ancient times, a measure of gold was called a talent: There once was a master and he had three servants. He goes on a trip and gives gold to each of them. The first one spends it having a good time, the second one purchases a rug in the market place. The third one goes out into the fields and buries it. When the master returns, he asks them what they did with the gold. The first one says, "I spent it and had a great time with my friends." The master says, "Very Good." The second one says, "I purchased a rug in the marketplace." The master says, "Very Good." The third one says, "Master, you will be most proud of me! I buried it in the fields and here it is!" The master beats him and sends him out of his house.
What do you think is Jesus' point? What lesson does he teach and how does it connect to you and Miesha? How does this story work on more than one level?
Jesus’ point in “Jesus’ Parable of the Talents” is that talents need to be put to use in order to mean anything. Every person has at least one talent that can be contributed to his/her own life and to those around him/her. If that person leaves the talent inside, no one will ever benefit – it’ll be a wasted talent. Although the third servant would have been the smartest in a story about character and morals, he is the one who made the biggest mistake in this story because the gold was the “talent” that was given to him. The third servant kept his gold because saving money is important in life. However, because the gold was a mere metaphor for “talent” in this story and the third servant was the only one who did not spend it, he did not use his talent.
Hiding his gold away for “safe keeping” did nothing for him. He did not get anything he really needed or did not have any fun with it, it was as if he did not have it. Nothing came out of it. If he were to have used it on something he wanted or needed, the gold would have meant more. For all he knew, he could die and it would stay buried in the field for someone else to enjoy it with no cost or hard work at all!
The story connects to Miesha and I because it is a message to make use of the talents given to you. If Miesha or I were to have used our talents for some other time, nothing good would have come of it. We would not have completed the tasks that were hard and, in the end, more worthwhile so we would not have anything to be proud of! However, following the moral of this story would allow us to make use of our talent for our benefit.
Because our talent is not gold or anything tangible, we are allowed to use it as much as we want! Our talent is not something that is limited to a mere object such as gold, so we can continue doing the things that require using the talents we were given. I think that would be another message Jesus is trying to say. What I am trying to say is, another moral to this story is that our talent has no limits in that we can use it as much as we want, and we should use it as much as we can.
The story has more than one level of meaning. The first meaning is that if something that has a monetary value is not used, it could be wasted from being lost or stolen. So we should use it before someone else has the chance to enjoy our items for us while we are off to the side, sad that we lost our money. The second level would be what I mentioned earlier – that if we do not use our talents, nothing good will come of it and so many times of learning and benefit would never have happened!
I think its great that your talent is perseverance, just like Miesha's :) I like what you said about it being a "key factor" in your success and how you'll use it in the future...I was laughing at the last part about growing physically (don't worry, I can totally relate to you!!) I think maybe one thing you could improve on is to give one or two examples of the challenges you said you used your perseverance to overcome, just to make it a little more personal so the reader gets to know a little more about you :)
ReplyDeleteI also like what you said about the parable of talents...my favorite part was what you wrote about how our talents have "no limit", and that "we should use it as much as we can"; I totally agree with that :)
I really liked your response, especially to the second part. I thought it was great hou you elaborated on deeper meaning of the story, such as how there is no limit to our talents and how we have to use them and not just let them go to waste. I also thought you did a good job of connecting the parable of talents back to the you and Meisha- maybe it would be a little helpful if you gave some examples of Meisha's and your own examples of perserverence to make a stronger argument. Super good though :)
ReplyDeleteWhat up Ari.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your response. I found it interesting, in part two of the post, that in discussing the importance of using your talents and how this was portrayed in Jesus's parable by the 3 servants you made the point about how the 3rd servant might have been considered the wisest if the story was centered around character morals. I've heard this story a thousand times in my life and that never crossed my mind.
Great job on both parts! :) The first part about your talent was very interesting but I could totally understand and relate to what you were saying. I also agree with what you said in the second part! I liked the last paragraph where you talked about the different levels of meaning. It really makes sense, and I liked how you talked about the gold with it's literal meaning as well.
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I loved it how you and Miesha have the same talent! Haha I can totally see how perseverance is your talent. I especially liked how detailed you got with the second part. I could tell that you put a lot of effort into it and I completely agree with what your opinion was of the deeper meanings. Good job!
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ReplyDeleteNice -_- face, hahaha. Dummy.
I agree, you do persevere. Or else you would not be in such rigorous classes and you probably would have dropped out of school by now.
I agree with you about Jesus and the talent. I think I wrote about the same thing in my essay. Wasted talent is unacceptable and shouldn't be buried in the ground!
Ari,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you were able to add some comedy to your essay. It helped the readers get to know you personally and show your other side. I also like how you kept it real in your essay. You showed your similarity to Miesha by having the same talent, but you didn't try to make yourself look better by saying that you have better perseverance than her. I thought that was great. Great job :)
ARI!
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you on the second part of your response :] *high five!
The first part of your response is sooo true. I honestly believe that your talent is perseverance. I've seen you persevere through so many hardships. You're tough girllll ^_^
Ari,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your response!
I like how you said perseverance is your talent, like Mieshas. What I really like is your second response. Very deep :)
Your are right, we have to use our talents if we want something out of them. The third servant not only did he not get anything, but he also got kicked out of the house. Poor guy
Wow, you got alot of comments girl!! But anyways I liked the fact that you didn't ignore this "talent" just being it was Miesha's as well. I think its great that you are planning and looking straight ahead into you future. I have known you for awhile now and you always manage to amaze me! You do great in Newswritting, and you have always taken rigerous courses! I remember in accounting I would always turn to you for every problem I had, Usually you would help me, but when you didn't know the answer yourself, you always pushed through and figured out a way to solve the problem no matter what it was! You picked your talent well! I liked the fact that you elaborated alot on the Jesus prompt. You made great connections from it to the story. I really liked that you said our talents impact those around us, not just ourselves. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAri! Your first part was alright, but it could have been much stronger! You knocked it out of the ballpark with your second half! I could see that you thought about this a whole lot and your writing conveys that! You were able to tie everything together! It was impressive! Keep that up!
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